Perplexed

Turn it inside out so I can see 
The part of you that’s drifting over me 
And when I wake up you’re never there
But when I sleep you’re everywhere

Just tell me how I got this far
Tell me why you’re here and who you are
Because every time I look, you’re never here
And every time I sleep, you’re always there

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61 Comments Add yours

  1. Come back to ground state…kid๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Frankly, you sound rude my dear friend, are you doing good?

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      1. Nothing rude !
        A piece of thought๐Ÿ˜‰
        Good . Hope you’re fine and doing well!

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      2. Such a relief to hear that mate! Missed your words! Glad to have you back!๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. Oh.. This is so touching..

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    1. Thank you! Glad to know you could feel it!

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      1. I totally could..

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  3. This is excellent! Well done.

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  4. Nirant Gurav says:

    Quality stuff mate !!

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      1. Nirant Gurav says:

        My absolute pleasure !!

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  5. Ravisingh says:

    Wow! Great post Priya! Dream is always beautiful . So enjoy every thing in your sleep! Eventually it is your enjoyment that should matter to you
    All the best Priya!

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    1. Thank you so much Ravi!
      Yes, the fantasy land is simply another world. Dream is the only place where you can have things work your way cause in practical life, it’s not possible everytime. So enjoying that!
      Thanks again!๐Ÿค—

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  6. Beautiful depiction of the dichotomy of suffering caused by parting from love.

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    1. Thank you for your best remarks!

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  7. huguetta says:

    Beautiful and deep ๐Ÿ™‚ This is the love week โค
    I have nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award
    https://huguetta.wordpress.com/2019/03/16/mystery-blogger-award-gift/
    Enjoy ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you Huguette!
      I’m grateful to have been nominated for the mystery blogger award by you! Congratulations on your nomination! โค๐Ÿค—

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      1. huguetta says:

        Most welcome Priya, my pleasure โค well deserved! and Thank you for the nice words ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. Thank you for your support. I’m highly honoured! โค๐Ÿค—

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      3. huguetta says:

        โค ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  8. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:

    Amazing. โ˜บ๏ธ

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    1. Thank you Ramyani!๐Ÿ˜Š

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  9. Anupriya K says:

    Beautiful โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’•

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    1. Thank you dear!โค๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Anupriya K says:

        You’re welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  10. Erannza says:

    I feel the same…

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    1. Glad to know that you could relate!

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    2. Hey Erannza!
      I’ve left a few comments on your post but I’m unable to see them on your page. Could you please check your spam and let me know.

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      1. Erannza says:

        Thank you dear Priya, indeed there were two comments that had been held in the spams, but they were not yours, I can see only one comment that is yours on “A ballet of characters”, the last poem I have written

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      2. Okay. I’ll send them again, no problem!

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      3. Erannza says:

        Thank you!!!

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      4. Pleasure always mate! You write exceptionally well! I read your diary too, beautiful!

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      5. Erannza says:

        I’m glad you read and liked it!!! I will write it on! And thank you for the compliments about my writing, the purity of your writing could touch me like no other, and I mean it

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      6. Thank you mate! And undoubtedly, likewise!

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      7. Erannza says:

        By the way, my name is not Erannza. Erannza is a name I came up with to mix and blend her name and mine – because she’s a writer too, and she writes as beautifully and lovingly as you do – and I would l like her to write with me, because it doesn’t make any sense to have a blog on my own, and if I created this blog in the first place it was for her

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      8. Oh, thanks for the clarification. Erannza sounds really nice and soothing! I love it! Thank you for your praise but I surely can’t be compared to her. You two are just another level. I hope that you two write together soon. Awaiting for your talent to be beautifully woven with hers! Best wishes!

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      9. Erannza says:

        Thank you for those beautiful wishes!

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  11. AWESOME…TRULY SPELLBOUND.

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  12. Jessica says:

    It gives me a fuzzy feeling that I can’t explain. So dreamy…

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    1. Thank you so much! Glad to know you could feel it!

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  13. Jessica says:

    Reblogged this on Cร fe Jessica and commented:
    This gives me a fuzzy feeling that I canโ€™t explain. So dreamyโ€ฆ

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    1. Thank you so much for the reblog! I appreciate it!

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    1. Thank you so much for reblogging! I appreciate it!

      Like

  14. Kitty Jade says:

    I understand. There in your dreams but not in reality. We have that deduction to decide which world is real! Great work ๐Ÿ‘ I remain inspired by you.
    Erin http://kittyjadeblog.com

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      1. Kitty Jade says:

        Sorry for the typo!

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