To our first meeting
There was something more
Something like I’ve never felt before
Like all the stars in the sky
Drank jealously and left others dry
Like all the pearls in an ocean
Begged for your sincere devotion
Like all the petals in a flower
Got devoid of their thorny dour
Like all the sand particles in a beach
Ask each other to beseech
Because to our first meeting
There was something more
Something you’ve already felt before
This is beautiful ❤️
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Thank you! ❤
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Truly magical! Like nature that has come alive. You have touched our hearts like touching the sky, the stars, flowers, pebbles and almost everything through your writing.
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Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. I’m so happy to know that you liked it. Really means a lot to me.
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A feeling I recognize myself in🦋
Good memories, thank you for sharing❤️
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Oh!
I’m so glad to hear that. My pleasure and thank you for reading. ❤
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❤️my pleasure🦋
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Something which can’t be felt again! Lovely❣️
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Yes exactly. Thank you so much! ❤
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Wonderfully written! Your words bring much peace in their understanding.
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Thank you so much for this beautiful praise.
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Lovely poetry ❤️
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Thank you Zeeshan! ❤
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Why is this depressing to me?
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*whatever*
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You dropped in uninvited 😠
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Hahaha! Meri marzi!😎
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Han ab woi baaki hai😑
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🤭🤭
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Because it is.
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Enlightening!!
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Seriously?!
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Miraculously.
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Scandalously.
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All the ly words.
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Waah! Undoubtedly!
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You’re just adding adverbs while I already covered them all in my previous comment.
I won.
1-0
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I didn’t add on adverbs.
I meant that your comment was sure to come, so undoubtedly.
You didn’t win!
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My delusional sister😁
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My trickery dada
* I know its wrongly used 😅 *
* couldn’t think of anything else *
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Chalega, behen, chalega.😃
*You’re a delight*
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Phew!😅
* That’s too much to digest.🙂 *
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A brother can’t give his sister a compliment? Huh. I take it back.
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Now that’s perfect. I can’t take compliments, sorry. Especially from someone I know (atleast not a stranger).
Don’t ask why.
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Maza aagaya.
You’re awesome!
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Don’t.
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Dada don’t.
You might think I have an attitude issue for I refuse to accept compliments from acquaintances, and its totally fine by me.
But no one knows that they sadden me.
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Acha sorry.
I don’t think you have attitude issues, it’s actually cute. 🙂 (Totally not a compliment) won’t happen again.
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There’s nothing to say sorry for. Sincerest thanks for your consideration. 🙂
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Oh goodness! This is beautiful! I loved your selection of words! 🙂
*From your friend who’s going through an emoji crisis* *haha*
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Thank you so much, Gauri!
* its absolutely fine *
* enjoying your presence as always *
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My pleasure!😊
*Whew*😅
*Yay! Hugs, hugs and more hugs*☺️
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Warmest hugs back!🤗🤗
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Yayy!🤗
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One time feeling beautifully written !
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful
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Thank you Sohanpreet!
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Truly touched my heart. Love how alive the scene are.
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Thank you so much Jess!
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Magic in every word ✨ Priya 🌸
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Thank you so much Ekta!
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Ahhh so mesmerizing
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful! 💕
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Thank you! 💕
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My pleasure, hugs! ❤️
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This is so enchanting!❤
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Thank you Shivani!❤
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Simply magical?❤️
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Thanks dear!❤
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Something deep and absurdly intense…mmmmmh
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Thank you!
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Anytime dear.
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Hmm beautiful is the word….. Love ur writing style 👍👍😊💟
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Thank you!
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Looooove this! I love the images you give ❤️
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Thank you! ❤❤
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