It lies beautifully upon the ceramic holder
Then stands seductively upon the shelf
Just like a folder, full of lies upon the counter
This beautiful glass tumbler proudly stands by itself
The lady outlining an hourglass
Is no different than the glass tumbler
They are two halves that make a whole
With her long silhouette of a gown
Gliding intricately across the floor
See the tumbler stand clear as crystal
Bringing night vision to day
In utter display of beauty
A sip from which you would think
All thirst would give way
The taste of hers in retrospect
Remains on the surface of my lips
The touch of her delicate fingers
Passionately lingers over my skin
A look away to attend to chores
A simple brisk movement in force
A sudden uneven sway of course
Brings the beautiful glass tumbling with force
Just like the alluring lady could not be loved
For she embodied oxidised metal
Her rustiness would cut superficially deep
Yielding surrender for life could not in creep
The floor once so clean now holds
A mess of broken pieces in shoes
She was a perfect combination of pain and sorrow
A good girl who could be bad today or tomorrow
For only she knew the balance to follow
-A collaboration with PePa.
Thank you for reading.
Great one
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Thank you!
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Welcome 😀
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🙂
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Good work Priya,You are amazing!
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Come on, you’ve worked harder! Thank you!
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But you are amazing you know?
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And you’re just too kind, you know?
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Hahahahah thanks…that is a stalemate.
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And you’re moving towards a checkmate! Hahaha
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Ooooh girl not again….
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I’m too bad! Haha
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And I still can’t get rid of you.
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Don’t worry, you soon will, very soon.
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Mmmmmh if it be your wish darling.Hahaha
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Hahahaha. Who likes to be forgotten?
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Hahahahahah I thought you did.
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Nah mate. I too am only human…
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Aaaah awesome!
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Yeah
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Wow, your words… this was a ride to me. So powerful and emotionel and heartfelting… I could feel this words far in to my bones🦋wow…
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I’m very happy to hear that you felt these words. Always an honor to have your feedback. Thank you so much, Lillian!😊
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🦋
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So heartfelt! Five stars collaboration!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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Thank you so much, Sonia! Your feedback really means a lot to me!😊
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❤️
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I have been in and around the Blogosphere for about three years or so now, I have come across a good number of Blogs, countless posts, poetry and so on.. You are one of the most talented writers if not the most of whose work seem just as though as they are ‘pure Gold!’
You are destined for greatness, keep doing you, your poetry is out of this world. – Cezane
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My eyes are blessed to read this, Cezane.
This really means a lot to me and especially coming from prowess writers like you makes it even more valuable and special. You’ve warmed my heart and I truly am grateful to you for having read my post and for giving your best remarks. Your presence is always much appreciated and I cannot seem to thank you enough for these kind and beautiful words.
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Superb and unparallel poem! loved it!
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Thank you so much, Ravi!☺️
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Love you dear!
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Thank you!
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Cool!
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I mean at this point what do you want me to say? I’m out of words
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I too don’t know what to expect.
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Damn priya, too emotional today?
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You know me very well. When am I not?
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Fair enough
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Yes
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😱 Hai raam!!
This is so eloquently and beautifully crafted!!
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Hehe. Thank you so much, Dhanya!☺️
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I am now super duper excited about our collaboration but I am struggling with my schedule these days. Do check your email 🙂
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I too am very excited and really looking forward to how it will turn out!
Its is perfectly fine, Dhanya. Do it whenever you find time. No sweat!🙂
Sorry for the late reply, both here and on mail.
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Phew! Thank you. 😅
I haven’t been so punctual myself.
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I couldn’t wait to get home to read this remarks….Cezane,Mmmmh….I never trust his remarks ….I mean the guy’s heart is made of gold itself…blessed and wrapped in warmth…But he has an eye for good things also I must admit.Thanks a lot buddy for those kind remarks…Dhanya…mmmmmhhh am still stuck on coriander and you are beautiful even in your remarks,thanks a lot….Ambitious Kriti.. you sweet little girl,you championed this so say something please.
Orkidedatter,meeting you for the first time and I am humbled by your remarks….
Dikshaprasher….Cezane do you know how to pronounce these Eastern names?A good one she has….Thanks a lot dearie…means a lot to us.
Am humbled beyond words and thank God he enabled us to do this…
Zealous Priya.You are a darling.Kudos too.
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Kudos mate!
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Awesome buddy.
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Very beautiful. ❤
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Thank you! ❤
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Wow! Beautiful poetry! 🙌🏻
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Thank you! 🙂
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