If you really, really love me, tell me
That you can’t survive a day without me
That you want me so much that you obsess over me
If you really, really want me, tell me
That your eyes don’t wander for a second
That you’re different from all others
Sometimes I want a lie that’s not a lie
Really
Very expressive and intense. Loved the way the flow was.
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Thank you so much Rupali! ☺
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I love you ,Priya!
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I respect you, Ravi!
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Thanks for saying so,Priya!
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My pleasure.
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These lines have me searching for the one that I love most in my mind so I can rush to her and say it to her all but.. ‘error 404, not found’ 😄, really enjoyed the emotion out of it. Nice one.
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I’m sure you’ll reach her very soon. You have the best in store waiting for you!
Thank you for taking out time to read this.😊
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Beautiful. I relate to this poem deeply.
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Thank you. Glad to know you could relate!☺
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Wow, this is amazing.
thanks for sharing.
https://www.flyhiee.com/reflection/its-my-choice/
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Thank you!
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❤
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A lie that ain’t a lie is an unbelievable and easily deniable truth.
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Yes mate, absolutely!
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Totally Zealous.
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if you’re truly loved by someone, there won’t be the need to ever say it, for you’d feel it.
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That’s true. Thank you mate!
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Love is for brave hearts only so don’t expect it from cowards
Lovely as usually 👍❤️
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A lie that’s not a lie…Beautifully expressed. A yearning I’ve felt deeply myself in the rare moments I find myself wanting another ❣️
Lovely write 💫
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Thank you so much! I wish you the best.❤
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This is gem 💞
Loved it totally Priya !!
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That means a lot, Nirant. Thank you!💕
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😊😊my absolute pleasure
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So is mine😊
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I love this
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Thank you!
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a lie that’s not a lie — priceless line! You are an awesome writer.
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Thank you so much dear, Krishnapriya! I truly appreciate your comments.
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i wish i could l could love like that — my beloved divine – with total dedication, no lies, no illusions — love, just the pure heart of complete giving. Thank you for writing so well and bringing light to my heart.
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You surely can and you do too. Just that the focus of light is distracted somewhere else, time will make you realise the best.
Thank you so much for your best remarks, dear friend.
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Most welcome, my beautiful Priya. 🙂
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Love this
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Thank you!
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Love is for brave hearts, don’t expect it from cowards!
Beautiful lines!
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Oh yeah!! Exactly! You are really bold!
Now I have received your comment * smiley *
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Glad you did 😊
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me too! smileys!
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❤
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Thank you
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You are welcome
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Loved it Priya… lie which not lie… I wonder if that one exist…
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Thank you, Chiru!
It definitely exists for me!
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Yassssssss girrrrrrrrrrl!!!!! 😀 We all wanna hear people telling us they need us 🙂 ❤
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Yes my ears are begging for it!😝😊❤
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Hehe 😛 ❤
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