Like the words written in the sand
Where the winds blew
I’m afraid you’ll disappear
So I always miss you
I can’t take out
All these words in my heart
But this means I love you
Standing in front of my destiny
That has passed me by
Deep inside my heart
Again, don’t let me cry
I can’t take out
All the things written in my diary
But this means I love you
I want to undo my actions
That did hurt you
I want to take back my words
That did strike you
I can’t take out
The sweet words lingering in my mouth
But this means I love you
The sadness in your eyes
Gives burden to my heart
The cementing of your expression
Shoots me like a poisonous dart
I can’t take out
The way of reciprocating feelings
But this means I love you
Now this loneliness feels like a prison
Coupled with joy that I can’t hide
All these mix of emotions kill me
A better substitute is to die with pride
I can’t take out
The courage to show my flawed heart and love
But this means I love you
Wow this is so amazing
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Thank you!
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So pretty to read !!
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Thank you Nirant!
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Pleasure always 😊
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Awesome 💗
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Thank you Tushara!💕
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❤ Love it!
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Thank you so much!💜
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You’re welcome! 💙
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Written with passion, truly a gem! 💗
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Thank you so much Beckie!💕
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Beautiful poem. 😃
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Thank you Ramyani!😊
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Nice use of repetition.
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Thank you for reading!
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My pleasure!
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“A better substitute is to die with pride”
This struggle is real and this pain is so real!
Beautiful and deep👍
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Thank you so much! Yes, it’s hard to get hold of things and the sufferings are real!
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I can relate, will ease with time
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Yes, everything takes time and all wounds will heal with the passage of time!
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👍👍❤️
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😊❤
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Sweet post..!
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Thank you Neha! 😊
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How are your broad exams going?
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Oh.. Amazing..! So far 5 papers down and 5 more to go..!
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Nice. You’re in 10th or 12th?
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10th..
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Okay. So a 100 in maths?
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😂😂
You know too..
I guess a hundred.. Hope for the best
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You did all questions correctly?!
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Yah.. I have I guess.. Except for an MCQ..
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MCQ? Wait, are you in ICSE or CBSE?
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Neither.. Maharashtra State Board
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Oh. Did you give NTSE?
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Umm I am afraid.. No
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No problem. What subjects are you taking next year?
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I am opting for Commerce because I wanna go into Finance Field..
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Oh lovely! All the best!
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Thank you very much.. Good Day..!
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You too!
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Yes, commiting mistake is a human nature But realizing your mistake solves half of your problem and accepting it rids you of your pain and suffering.
I loved the line-” This means I love you” bcz its pure feeling!
Love you Priya!
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Couldn’t agree less!
Thank you for reading!💕😊
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Yolo!
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Sure!😊
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I love it ❤️
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Thank you!💕
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Beautiful peace ♥️
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Thank you!💕
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Awesome
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Thank you!
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Beautiful 👏
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Thank you!😊
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great
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Thanks
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for what ??
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The poem
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ok
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😊
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hey i was waitting for your msg..
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What message are you talking about?
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Priya right ??
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Yeah
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How are you ?
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I’m good. How are you?
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great..
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Very well!😊
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Your exams are going on ??
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How do you know?
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you told me when we talked about ourself.. you are in 10th class ??
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Oh yes!
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☺☺
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😊💕
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❤❤
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Falling in love with your writing..Truly amazing
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Aww, thank you so much! You made my day, lovely!❤
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How’s ur exams going
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How’s ur exams going
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They’re going good. I had science today and have hindi on 19th.
How are you?
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Yeah…Am also doing good …I had physics today . Next is English on 15th
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Great!
Which grade are you in?
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11th…Next is 12th …Very much nervous
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11th…Next is 12th …Very much nervous
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11th…Next is 12th …Very much nervous
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Its alright. You’ll do great! Just keep your head down and your hardwork will pay off!😊
Which board by the way?
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CHSE odisha…Govt board
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Okay 👍🏻
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11th … Next year life barbad hone wali hai
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Wait, why are you saying so! Think it this way, you’re going to learn so many new things! It will be fun!
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Yes …. I always try to take things positive…So will now…But fir v .. Little fear is still there
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Go girl! That’s the spirit!
Yes, its very natural to be tensed but don’t let it overpower your confidence! 🤗
Best wishes!
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Thanks dear…Hey ..Do you follow my blog
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Now I do!
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😊😊😊
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I jus commented in your post. Let me know if you’ve received it.
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Yeah I got it
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What a relief 😂😉
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Am I irritating u
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What!!!
Wait, get such thoughts out if your head dearie! I love taking to you!🤗
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Me too
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Yay! Great!😊
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OK goodnight….I have to go mama is calling . Best of luck for your exams
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Sure no problem. Good night and take care! Thank you and best wishes to you too!😊
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I really love this one.. you’re amazing. Never doubt it. 😊
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Thank you so much!😊 I’m glad you liked it!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you so much!😊
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🙂
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I hope you will one day be able to hug and caress him with your words and your deeds as you wish to
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Thank you so much for your wishes! I too hope I’m able to do the same very soon!💕
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Very, very soon hopefully! 💕
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Hoping dear!
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This is beautiful!!!!
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Thank you so much!
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Can you inform me what system are you using on this website?
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